tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2699057649239873761..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Crosscut by David B. BarnesCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-16601890539491239272021-01-04T11:22:45.847+00:002021-01-04T11:22:45.847+00:00Stormy....how’d the new one read? Stormy....how’d the new one read? David Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03297938234518646778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35538248105504442182020-12-24T22:43:46.655+00:002020-12-24T22:43:46.655+00:00Thanks, David. On my way.Thanks, David. On my way.Norm (Stormy) Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06614268676153939058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-82976104374581647142020-12-24T18:53:45.701+00:002020-12-24T18:53:45.701+00:00Stormy. If you see this go to East of the Web and ...Stormy. If you see this go to East of the Web and look at New Short StoriesDavid Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03297938234518646778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-22751031534315205092020-08-31T20:58:02.470+01:002020-08-31T20:58:02.470+01:00I just figured out it's both print and onlineI just figured out it's both print and onlineDavid Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03297938234518646778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-11512828519735766712020-08-26T04:29:35.582+01:002020-08-26T04:29:35.582+01:00Thanks, David,
Hopefully, it will be online, much...Thanks, David, <br />Hopefully, it will be online, much easier access right now.Norm (Stormy) Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06614268676153939058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64551336822693326592020-08-26T00:44:31.097+01:002020-08-26T00:44:31.097+01:00Fine Lines is planning to publish Everone Has Plan...Fine Lines is planning to publish Everone Has Plans in the Autumn issue. I don't know if it's online or print though.David Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03297938234518646778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-6044713877189115072020-08-14T20:28:50.167+01:002020-08-14T20:28:50.167+01:00You're doing great, David, we've done two ...You're doing great, David, we've done two at our weekly meetings and would sure welcome another.Norm (Stormy) Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06614268676153939058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75254837807492885702020-08-14T15:28:17.412+01:002020-08-14T15:28:17.412+01:00Thank you for the comments. I'm learning how ...Thank you for the comments. I'm learning how to tell these stories...maybe another will be on here one day.David Barnesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-88287434629318465012020-06-27T19:46:36.980+01:002020-06-27T19:46:36.980+01:00This story is amazing..Storm...
Ty for picking it....This story is amazing..Storm...<br />Ty for picking it.<br />I am amazed at the outcome, near expected it. Wow is all I can say<br />lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12587520561305143392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28057392407860704122020-06-21T20:38:13.612+01:002020-06-21T20:38:13.612+01:00Excellent story, our weekly reader group did "...Excellent story, our weekly reader group did "The Mouse" Saturday and one of our readers found this one for next week,<br />Great work Mr. Barnes, thank you.Norm (Stormy) Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06614268676153939058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-18908357569510187402020-05-06T12:55:58.863+01:002020-05-06T12:55:58.863+01:00I want to hear the rest of the story! Very curiou...I want to hear the rest of the story! Very curious about the connection Willow had with Pop Up. Love the local references. Will there be a sequel? Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15424450253138522453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62108979371429952332020-03-25T17:41:39.021+00:002020-03-25T17:41:39.021+00:00Interesting characters, especially Willow...her ro...Interesting characters, especially Willow...her role in the whole operation is a bit mysterious. Crosscut finds himself on the verge of another major turning point, interesting to wonder how he'll angle the situation to survive (and, if his history is any indication, ultimately thrive).Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77284721335288666452020-03-24T19:49:42.219+00:002020-03-24T19:49:42.219+00:00Good characters and descriptions. I would have lik...Good characters and descriptions. I would have liked a bit more dialogue to break up the narrative, but overall a very good read.Patrick Ritterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235970043155752374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70758384396535526812020-03-23T21:56:28.715+00:002020-03-23T21:56:28.715+00:00Good read. Area details makes all so believable an...Good read. Area details makes all so believable and familiar. Can't wait for sequel.<br />Arniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08771506241709786154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-4540304193032211802020-03-23T19:36:54.900+00:002020-03-23T19:36:54.900+00:00Good read DB, Ireally enjoyed it, and more words ...Good read DB, Ireally enjoyed it, and more words that you ever put on blue paper.....LOLBlondienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-53237555024345331182020-03-23T18:45:12.111+00:002020-03-23T18:45:12.111+00:00Kind of a "Copperhead road" story...Cros...Kind of a "Copperhead road" story...Crosscut is an intriguing character, he gets manipulated and betrayed...he is non violent and honest in his own way...he never rats on anyone. <br />I liked the background story too, of his honest grandfather and his dad...he inherited both their traits. Willow seemed a bit of a wild card..an opportunist more than likely. Interesting story with a complex main character.<br /><br />Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38527092527169170482020-03-23T16:26:57.779+00:002020-03-23T16:26:57.779+00:00Good read! I think I detect some talent here, as w...Good read! I think I detect some talent here, as well as an inside perspective.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13249104918542105186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24213547088466485852020-03-23T15:04:07.360+00:002020-03-23T15:04:07.360+00:00Very well written!! Keep up the good work!!Very well written!! Keep up the good work!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11593067528190518592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38624964400599660242020-03-23T11:14:31.150+00:002020-03-23T11:14:31.150+00:00A well-written story. Author got into the mind of...A well-written story. Author got into the mind of a very evil character, which takes some doing. Well done.Rosemary Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05797123703252258773noreply@blogger.com