tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post295879018749461008..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Number One by Nomi LironCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5052926833005099042013-05-24T03:32:20.549+01:002013-05-24T03:32:20.549+01:00Love the twist at the end - her cruel words bring ...Love the twist at the end - her cruel words bring her sister back to life. Marie is a great character, so well done in the details, the glucose machine, praying in the hall. Great storyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72336765839159092192013-05-24T03:20:12.131+01:002013-05-24T03:20:12.131+01:00Loved the twist - her sister's cruel words bri...Loved the twist - her sister's cruel words bringing her back to life. What a character Marie is. All the little details were done so well, the glucose reader,the praying in the hall.<br />Great little story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28329898539717109012013-04-04T11:06:37.462+01:002013-04-04T11:06:37.462+01:00An excellent satire of the self-centred character....An excellent satire of the self-centred character. And an excellent ending -- Marie ruins her day by provoking her sister to come back to life. Where kind words could not bring her back, Marie's appalling and cruel selfishness made resurrection wonders. Indeed, hard not to explode back to life after hearing something like that. I really loved this story. Irena Pasvinterhttps://sites.google.com/site/ipscribblings/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75270021288651263232013-03-19T15:42:07.913+00:002013-03-19T15:42:07.913+00:00Every family seems to have one, and, yes, Michael,...Every family seems to have one, and, yes, Michael, I think, sadly more folks have indeed become wrapped up in themselves. I think, however, the story points out that the sister is the exception, and, for the most part, everyone else is genuinely concerned for the real patient and the surviviing members of the family. AKA - most people are good people.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65638624554206026862013-03-19T09:19:37.873+00:002013-03-19T09:19:37.873+00:00a reflection on modern times? are people really so...a reflection on modern times? are people really so<br />wrapped up in themselves today? some certainly.<br />hits the nail right on the head<br /><br />michael mccarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com