tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3479879330536023388..comments2024-03-19T07:16:47.153+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Snakebit by Sharon Frame GayCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81713633155809875292016-06-29T21:46:53.829+01:002016-06-29T21:46:53.829+01:00Mitchell, Good point! One does snare a rabbit. I...Mitchell, Good point! One does snare a rabbit. I stand corrected! <br />Thanks<br />Sharonsharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-11162350405618926582016-06-24T00:10:12.190+01:002016-06-24T00:10:12.190+01:00I liked the gold tooth. Also, imagining how it wou...I liked the gold tooth. Also, imagining how it would feel to lie still, waiting for the eagle. Quick question: would it not be "snare" a rabbit? Tracking seemed unlikely to me and was was the only time when I was bumped out of the story. Not a criticism as much as a question. <br /><br />Solid beginning, great story, pace & structure just right.<br /><br />Migwetch, as they might say a little further north. <br /><br />@mitchell_toewsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38062531692822469272016-06-16T16:47:27.823+01:002016-06-16T16:47:27.823+01:00I am humbled and touched by all your wonderful com...I am humbled and touched by all your wonderful comments. Thank you so much for reading my story!<br />Sharonsharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-60775085070214620112016-06-15T21:06:03.318+01:002016-06-15T21:06:03.318+01:00It kept my attentions till the last alphabet. Than...It kept my attentions till the last alphabet. Thank youDeniyi L'ébènehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04604894321899217698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-18312753577852007482016-06-15T14:01:23.262+01:002016-06-15T14:01:23.262+01:00What a great story! Fast-moving and absorbing unt...What a great story! Fast-moving and absorbing until the last word. Well done, Sharon. Keep writing!<br />Beryl.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07998837733272835592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37772301521969595412016-06-14T16:32:50.630+01:002016-06-14T16:32:50.630+01:00Beautiful, gripping and poetic - Sharon, this is a...Beautiful, gripping and poetic - Sharon, this is a wonderful piece of writing - a true accomplishment!Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38618188406680159672016-06-14T14:18:46.282+01:002016-06-14T14:18:46.282+01:00A stark comparison to our lives. Well written.A stark comparison to our lives. Well written.Doughttps://sites.google.com/site/aberrantword/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29144541217295410232016-06-14T14:06:46.805+01:002016-06-14T14:06:46.805+01:00oops - meant to type Shimasani or Shamasani with a...oops - meant to type Shimasani or Shamasani with an "n" - too early in the morning in America! :)sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-42509950532557256742016-06-14T14:05:04.223+01:002016-06-14T14:05:04.223+01:00Shimasami, or Shamasami, is the Navajo name for ma...Shimasami, or Shamasami, is the Navajo name for maternal grandmother. The work is pure fiction from my rattled brain, however. :) Thanks for taking the time to read it and for your comments! sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64547593911066387212016-06-14T13:25:14.899+01:002016-06-14T13:25:14.899+01:00A moving story with all its facets fully coming to...A moving story with all its facets fully coming together at the end...Its voice reads well, I'm not familiar with Shimasami Navaho but sounds convincing to me!<br />B r o o k eAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85354660138937260142016-06-14T10:44:36.525+01:002016-06-14T10:44:36.525+01:00yes, it really is a powerful story. I too was tota...yes, it really is a powerful story. I too was totally taken by it, a fascinating piece of writing.<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65231462968000945182016-06-14T09:48:08.811+01:002016-06-14T09:48:08.811+01:00I was totally enthralled by this story - its reach...I was totally enthralled by this story - its reach and lyricism were compelling, thank you so much, <br />Ceinwen Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com