tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3624900436565250159..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Room 405 by Ken WetheringtonCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58760641501724108832022-04-23T23:10:36.334+01:002022-04-23T23:10:36.334+01:00I thought this was terrific. Not over the top in ...I thought this was terrific. Not over the top in terms of,"leading the reader," but fast paced with great action and descriptions. Super emotion and a sustained level of energy throughout as well. David Lanverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047128645776257464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23047498119812192242022-04-14T09:37:16.877+01:002022-04-14T09:37:16.877+01:00I loved the no-messing fast pace of this story. I ...I loved the no-messing fast pace of this story. I was gripped all the way through and the hints about the identity of the mad woman were subtle but effective. The well-written ending confirmed our suspicions beautifully. Sheena is writing...https://www.blogger.com/profile/00736320900905986308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57115335836964379172022-04-12T13:16:24.127+01:002022-04-12T13:16:24.127+01:00A well-paced story with a controlled reveal and re...A well-paced story with a controlled reveal and religious metaphors. (Where is my Jesús? Why has he deserted me?) Nicely done. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.com