tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3665331880021758394..comments2024-03-19T02:08:31.357+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: You're Mine by Michael McCarthyCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-2359575721591149112014-03-22T10:08:37.872+00:002014-03-22T10:08:37.872+00:00many thanks Katherine for your Kind words, just cl...many thanks Katherine for your Kind words, just click on my Name at the end of the Story for more of my work!<br /><br />MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59814404350520115372014-03-21T23:15:41.969+00:002014-03-21T23:15:41.969+00:00I really enjoyed this. It had a little bit of a s...I really enjoyed this. It had a little bit of a slow start, but the end more than made up for it. I look forward to reading more of your work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08069988993209223407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-32176535657251671862014-03-07T17:50:33.547+00:002014-03-07T17:50:33.547+00:00A fairy tale for those who ignore the dominance of...A fairy tale for those who ignore the dominance of women. They know and decide from the very beginning how it's going on. Remarkable description<br />of an evergreen situation. Emphathic story. I enjoyed reading. NorbertAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-54243415942772802112014-03-06T10:20:50.243+00:002014-03-06T10:20:50.243+00:00Great Story. Keep on writing, Michael!Great Story. Keep on writing, Michael!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3698608573743816932014-03-03T12:05:49.224+00:002014-03-03T12:05:49.224+00:00Brilliant as usual Michael! Keep it up!Brilliant as usual Michael! Keep it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3470532062710086882014-03-01T10:34:22.199+00:002014-03-01T10:34:22.199+00:00Hi Jim, many thanks for your kind words, looking F...Hi Jim, many thanks for your kind words, looking Forward to your next.<br /><br />Hi Tim, Thank You, very much for reading the Story, I really appreciate your comments.<br /><br />MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29035116418359814892014-02-28T17:57:53.618+00:002014-02-28T17:57:53.618+00:00Effortless prose carries you along the entire way....Effortless prose carries you along the entire way. Also, you have a real patience about your writing, not diving into the obvious next moment but lingering in the details and slipping into forward when it's least expected. Thank you for the wonderful read.Tim Macynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13860909500126181772014-02-28T15:57:46.930+00:002014-02-28T15:57:46.930+00:00Woooow! Another brilliantly written story, Michael...Woooow! Another brilliantly written story, Michael. The voice here, and the words, are just fabulous. Not to mention the pacing - such nice tension. I was pulled in to the story with the same hypnotic draw that your protagonist felt with his seductress. Very nicely done.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com