tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3780469485904901249..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: From the Humber River to the Java Sea by Abe MargelCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21735153545379257682021-05-28T19:35:44.929+01:002021-05-28T19:35:44.929+01:00This story explores "how things could be"...This story explores "how things could be" vs. "how things are." The ending saddened me, I was hoping the story would continue down the "how things could be" path...but alas, Ahmed had other plans.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84177825722312687062021-05-17T18:27:48.470+01:002021-05-17T18:27:48.470+01:00Quite an interesting and well written story. The ...Quite an interesting and well written story. The characters are well drawn though I didn't buy that the deceptive Ahmed would try and blow up a plane, esp. out of Indonesia during an international conference. The naiive character of the girl is well created, and the descriptions of Islamic fundamentalism ring true.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.com