tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3995120944137713965..comments2024-03-28T08:51:20.299+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Swinging By Mary OrdosCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64807285640259606102016-05-03T13:12:51.715+01:002016-05-03T13:12:51.715+01:00What a great story. Engaging prose, with powerful ...What a great story. Engaging prose, with powerful descriptions of grief. Wow. My only negative critique as a reader: alternating use of past tenses in the flashback section was confusing at times (simple past and past perfect) but it was no show-stopper. Overall, well done.<br /><br />Sorry for the deletion of the previous comment. I changed the comment logon.Chris Wighthttp://www.leisuremaximus.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85687916355367746122016-05-02T21:40:18.830+01:002016-05-02T21:40:18.830+01:00Great story Great story Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03175246849958117104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57368281542496605282016-05-01T18:05:05.923+01:002016-05-01T18:05:05.923+01:00Wonderfully crafted - I enjoyed it. Thank you.Wonderfully crafted - I enjoyed it. Thank you.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-45489976628154650022016-05-01T17:02:38.056+01:002016-05-01T17:02:38.056+01:00a superbly written and moving story of the hopes a...a superbly written and moving story of the hopes and losses of life, not a word over used. first class!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40795488490956103192016-05-01T12:23:40.431+01:002016-05-01T12:23:40.431+01:00A story that plums and expresses the depth of raw ...A story that plums and expresses the depth of raw grief and skillfully avoids the pitfall over-telling. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com