tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4047247528462861411..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Biter Bit by Harry DowneyCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-60652749874002340752017-01-23T16:15:35.396+00:002017-01-23T16:15:35.396+00:00I enjoyed this short story. A quirky cast of chara...I enjoyed this short story. A quirky cast of characters indeed. What an intriguing tale. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-34412625444855319402014-01-20T18:44:52.539+00:002014-01-20T18:44:52.539+00:00The last letter from his wife is so severe--materi...The last letter from his wife is so severe--materialistic, the children as things, the body remake, everything so casually factual, cold, clinical, even if the tone is that island politeness. A good upside down of the typical earnest emotion filled letter to close a story.Jeff Burtnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-33645829914094191272014-01-19T17:07:45.335+00:002014-01-19T17:07:45.335+00:00Karma makes a cameo in "Freddie's Revenge...Karma makes a cameo in "Freddie's Revenge." Quite the cast of characters, and a nice development of each, some of which could have almost been short stories on their own! Nice job.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com