tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4087002017199196781..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Notebook By Randy AttwoodCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71881115453494051112019-11-05T09:04:05.885+00:002019-11-05T09:04:05.885+00:00This is a very clever plot with plenty of good twi...This is a very clever plot with plenty of good twists. It also provides a decent example of an "unreliable narrator" (Jeremy), who lies to the reader for the whole first "Jeremy" section (at least). But that's ok, because that's the lie that Jeremy was living. However, I did wonder when Sarah would have had a chance to record her recollections prior to her demise...Peter Ninneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858634785426826779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58038908191740458412019-10-19T20:38:49.278+01:002019-10-19T20:38:49.278+01:00A very twisted story, but also sad in a lot of way...A very twisted story, but also sad in a lot of ways.Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67471801537165682842019-09-21T03:11:10.553+01:002019-09-21T03:11:10.553+01:00Quite an internecine tale. The writer knows a thi...Quite an internecine tale. The writer knows a thing or two about suicide...why people do it and how it affects the survivors.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-63124094058099824052019-09-20T14:20:06.905+01:002019-09-20T14:20:06.905+01:00Well crafted with subtle reveals throughout to slo...Well crafted with subtle reveals throughout to slowly peel through the layers and arrive at the underlying truth. I enjoyed going back and re-reading the opening section after understanding more about Jeremy and Don's relationship.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.com