tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4111319395296942221..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Dilemma by Beryl Ensor-SmithCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-8002875606099308552015-05-23T08:06:26.902+01:002015-05-23T08:06:26.902+01:00Hi Beryl,
Thanks again for your story and for your...Hi Beryl,<br />Thanks again for your story and for your message. My last one was on April 19th, and I've got another couple coming up in June. I'll look forwards to your next one too,<br />Best wishes,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25104134291227674132015-05-22T07:19:33.449+01:002015-05-22T07:19:33.449+01:00Thank you Ceinwen, Mike and Jessica for your feedb...Thank you Ceinwen, Mike and Jessica for your feedback. Always appreciated. Jessica, I've taken your comment regarding exclamations on board and will be less liberal with them in future (!)<br /><br />I hope I didn't miss another of your stories while we were away, Ceinwen? Look forward to reading one soon. Good to hear from both Mike and yourself.<br />All the best to the three of you and thanks for taking time to read my story.<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50608157049333493642015-05-20T15:49:16.834+01:002015-05-20T15:49:16.834+01:00I can't get the visual of not wanting to be sm...I can't get the visual of not wanting to be smothered in her fat out of my head. Great descriptions in here. I would lighten up on the exclamations though. They lose their potency when you use too many. Very fun though.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13800244766592594222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-90926233588443123692015-05-20T08:28:24.078+01:002015-05-20T08:28:24.078+01:00this is very clever and as Ceinwen says a perfect ...this is very clever and as Ceinwen says a perfect example of the confusions, doubts and machinations that occupy and drive us all<br /><br />well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-4990503829763751192015-05-19T17:30:11.649+01:002015-05-19T17:30:11.649+01:00Witty and perceptive, a finely tuned romp through ...Witty and perceptive, a finely tuned romp through human foibles and frailties. A delightful microcosmic tale that reflects the macro-cosmic shifts that ultimately drive the destiny of humankind. A good read, thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com