tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4392350958868981286..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Not My Own by Robert "Bo" ForehandCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57452247852430284062014-07-23T16:35:01.876+01:002014-07-23T16:35:01.876+01:00Awesome stuff Bo! Tight well written and no wasted...Awesome stuff Bo! Tight well written and no wasted words. Samuraihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09505114316038788488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-34432429118438482632014-07-23T01:00:59.722+01:002014-07-23T01:00:59.722+01:00MOOOOVVVVIIIEEEEEEMOOOOVVVVIIIEEEEEEAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78009931922865490242014-07-22T16:47:54.720+01:002014-07-22T16:47:54.720+01:00This story is AWESOME. Would be even cooler as a m...This story is AWESOME. Would be even cooler as a movie! Jordannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70899309628975194162014-07-19T11:18:53.576+01:002014-07-19T11:18:53.576+01:00Very tight, breezy little flash. Good amount of b...Very tight, breezy little flash. Good amount of bite to make it memorable.Pathoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03446639038119049404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56553016429955248912014-07-18T17:26:04.139+01:002014-07-18T17:26:04.139+01:00Now this is a different take on the body swap them...Now this is a different take on the body swap theme! Whoa!! Nicely done and I'm with Michael, great use of words.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-6802982226136976802014-07-18T13:52:39.504+01:002014-07-18T13:52:39.504+01:00i found this absolutely brilliant. great use of wo...i found this absolutely brilliant. great use of words i.e. <br /><br />Sinuses ripping out of my skull with a sharp fishhook. <br /><br /><br />first class<br /><br />Michael McCarthy<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com