tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4449408529441021135..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: On the Edge by Clifford HuiCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-61729794235644865462019-12-26T17:14:11.141+00:002019-12-26T17:14:11.141+00:00An emotional story from a man's point of view....An emotional story from a man's point of view. Unusual. Difficult to perceive the drift at the beginning, but from the point where Raul's father died it took off. Rosemary Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05797123703252258773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5959310118752691332019-12-11T03:28:12.008+00:002019-12-11T03:28:12.008+00:00Life serving up curveball after curveball. Easy to...Life serving up curveball after curveball. Easy to relate.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91574530897440516472019-11-19T17:39:16.783+00:002019-11-19T17:39:16.783+00:00The bit about music as therapy and the family dyna...The bit about music as therapy and the family dynamic was interesting.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-6734642441980740132019-11-19T14:32:15.025+00:002019-11-19T14:32:15.025+00:00Excellent story. I liked the imagery and the inter...Excellent story. I liked the imagery and the intertwining of the different story elements. Nicely Done.James Rumpelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983186433099791617noreply@blogger.com