tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4520293940673623785..comments2024-03-29T14:45:42.371+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: El Paso by Sharon Frame GayCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67353582697624252892018-12-12T00:32:31.578+00:002018-12-12T00:32:31.578+00:00Thank you Jim!Thank you Jim!sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74681173663441847992018-12-11T23:46:24.200+00:002018-12-11T23:46:24.200+00:00A story that really takes you in and lets you feel...A story that really takes you in and lets you feel lost with Phoebe, while all the while feeling for her. I can't help but hope she ends up with a Masters at some top eastern college. <br />Nicely done!<br />Jim<br /><br />Grea Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36371508129889634822018-12-11T19:21:10.674+00:002018-12-11T19:21:10.674+00:00Wow, Dave, thank you so much! My goal is always to...Wow, Dave, thank you so much! My goal is always to touch others with my words. I'm so grateful you enjoyed it!sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-7415830409320348852018-12-11T18:52:07.127+00:002018-12-11T18:52:07.127+00:00Beautifully written and heartfelt. It’s a pleasure...Beautifully written and heartfelt. It’s a pleasure to read a piece with characters so believable you can feel their torments and hopes. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57783941252445523162018-12-11T14:29:11.097+00:002018-12-11T14:29:11.097+00:00Thank you all for your kind words! Am having trou...Thank you all for your kind words! Am having trouble posting my comment, hope this comes through. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story!sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81397389460198836392018-12-11T00:32:12.029+00:002018-12-11T00:32:12.029+00:00Concise, descriptive phrases - so much said, the w...Concise, descriptive phrases - so much said, the word pictures dazzle. I always love your stories. Thank you, Sharon.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73925331329312384392018-12-10T19:22:24.227+00:002018-12-10T19:22:24.227+00:00Excellent writing, a compelling story. Many thanks...Excellent writing, a compelling story. Many thanks <br />Ceinwen Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49919413435084300942018-12-10T12:57:48.356+00:002018-12-10T12:57:48.356+00:00a first class story. Phoebe is a totally credible ...a first class story. Phoebe is a totally credible and sympathetic character, who one wishes well. and I would think has a future?<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com