tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4826386429863305116..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Debacle by Beryl Ensor-SmithCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-69200699483705411822018-03-02T16:56:49.369+00:002018-03-02T16:56:49.369+00:00Hi Beryzl,
just read this in the FOTW book. i thin...Hi Beryzl,<br />just read this in the FOTW book. i think this is exceptional, full of twists, great idea and, as usual, real characters<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77047452307774518042014-09-04T18:24:38.590+01:002014-09-04T18:24:38.590+01:00Thank you James, Jim, Brooke, Don and Sam for your...Thank you James, Jim, Brooke, Don and Sam for your feedback which is much appreciated. Sorry to have been late in acknowledging your comments but we've been up the coast looking for Spring flowers ... they're here one day and gone the next! Sadly we were too late to find many but had a good time anyway. <br />Best wishes,<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35661085946977286172014-09-01T16:56:53.042+01:002014-09-01T16:56:53.042+01:00This was an interesting story, Beryl. Thank you!This was an interesting story, Beryl. Thank you!Sam Kandejhttp://kandej.irnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-41371311179536564342014-09-01T11:34:57.492+01:002014-09-01T11:34:57.492+01:00I liked the idea of the story but the pov was inco...I liked the idea of the story but the pov was inconsistent, which made it hard to become immersed in the characters.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06903782303735575143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81429873499041401332014-09-01T10:39:28.080+01:002014-09-01T10:39:28.080+01:00Oh dear! What a tangled web Christina & Hans w...Oh dear! What a tangled web Christina & Hans weave for themselves - Christina doing most of the weaving. I found myself laughing out loud at Sarie's unexpected who's who of cemetery geography, and the 'occult' misunderstanding.<br />Another well-told and hilarious story!<br /><br />Brooke FieldhouseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13931819283017435442014-08-31T16:12:24.424+01:002014-08-31T16:12:24.424+01:00I'm with James on this one - but, instead of &...I'm with James on this one - but, instead of "half-baked" schemes, I'm not sure the oven was even turned on! :-) Another fun read, Beryl!Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-20550230000875166072014-08-31T14:08:20.501+01:002014-08-31T14:08:20.501+01:00A hen-pecked husband with a short attention span, ...A hen-pecked husband with a short attention span, an overbearing wife who cooks up half-baked schemes, their loony friends, a cemetary at midnight, a shovel and a torch, a dead dog, a 'ghost'...what could go wrong? A well-potted recipe for disaster full of village characters well-equipped to pull it all off. If you live with the devil, what do you expect? A well told story.<br /><br />James Shaffer Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com