tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4977283549346140076..comments2024-03-19T02:08:31.357+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Do You Have Any Instincts? by Kacy CunninghamCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-51444573549103369662014-08-29T18:56:56.619+01:002014-08-29T18:56:56.619+01:00Really enjoyed your story. You did a nice job desc...Really enjoyed your story. You did a nice job describing the inevitable arc of many a relationship. <br /><br />Oscar DavisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50767610821133488852014-08-18T11:16:06.699+01:002014-08-18T11:16:06.699+01:00First person past tense - haunting man, haunting!
...First person past tense - haunting man, haunting!<br /><br />Brooke FieldhouseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37152963318846682112014-08-18T07:48:32.790+01:002014-08-18T07:48:32.790+01:00I liked those café days too :-)I liked those café days too :-)Sam Kandejhttp://www.kandej.irnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5958580108501012112014-08-18T04:01:16.407+01:002014-08-18T04:01:16.407+01:00Well done. Nice depiction of the feeling of somet...Well done. Nice depiction of the feeling of something ending.Charlie Bennetthttp://charliebennettstories.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-12785464360341024592014-08-17T16:19:07.835+01:002014-08-17T16:19:07.835+01:00I really enjoyed this story. The emotion comes thr...I really enjoyed this story. The emotion comes through clear and real. Great pieceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-32225617561500654322014-08-17T10:13:52.201+01:002014-08-17T10:13:52.201+01:00this is such a great story, love the words and the...this is such a great story, love the words and the construction. maybe not so unusual, also sounds like it may be true. either way, first class.<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com