tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5025111936723953260..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: No Curfew by Matthew WildingCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-586626049784630962014-04-17T17:55:44.355+01:002014-04-17T17:55:44.355+01:00Love this story. Well done! Glad he walked off w...Love this story. Well done! Glad he walked off without waking her; glad she woke and saw him.Maui Holcombnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-19620571681712179382014-04-17T14:08:48.030+01:002014-04-17T14:08:48.030+01:00Lovely piece--good balance of moods and tone. You ...Lovely piece--good balance of moods and tone. You create a vibrant place with complexity and familiarity. It really does feel like a small town and it captures that awkward blend of nostalgia and alienation very well. <br /><br />Good story!<br /><br />--Wendy HammerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35258985455146805552014-04-16T12:40:37.013+01:002014-04-16T12:40:37.013+01:00Wow. Thanks for the positive feedback, everyone!Wow. Thanks for the positive feedback, everyone!Matthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08651677823229175188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62447286406663674752014-04-16T01:56:52.049+01:002014-04-16T01:56:52.049+01:00An enjoyable and easy to read story which demonst...An enjoyable and easy to read story which demonstrate a keen knack of character development. Good job~Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14351753179105163455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75373327136858118912014-04-15T20:32:40.751+01:002014-04-15T20:32:40.751+01:00I'm envious of the writer's ability to wri...I'm envious of the writer's ability to write a simple story about characters and keep it so interesting, a page turner for its ease of reading and charm.Tim Macynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71600456809732345222014-04-15T16:04:17.615+01:002014-04-15T16:04:17.615+01:00I agree with Michael - the story has such a nice f...I agree with Michael - the story has such a nice flow that makes it "easy to read," and you find yourself almost "knowing" the characters as if you were a local as well. Nicely done. Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76010763954216773772014-04-15T09:04:08.995+01:002014-04-15T09:04:08.995+01:00what a really good story, lovely characters and mo...what a really good story, lovely characters and mood and description<br />easy to read (complement!) and an ending with hope?<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com