tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post512862098393525452..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Hide-Behind by T. D. Storm Charlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-20346611723258881962021-07-21T14:27:08.338+01:002021-07-21T14:27:08.338+01:00A very contemplative tale. Interesting to watch Fi...A very contemplative tale. Interesting to watch Fiona trying to figure it all out. I enjoyed the different perspectives given by the characters of different ages.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58990688174257806932021-07-19T11:14:44.103+01:002021-07-19T11:14:44.103+01:00A well constructed and delivered story with good c...A well constructed and delivered story with good characterisation.Nick Graynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24921073258776085882021-07-13T02:53:39.510+01:002021-07-13T02:53:39.510+01:00There were some lovely sentences in this piece. Al...There were some lovely sentences in this piece. Also loved the ending. Well done.Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-61466975524756979192021-07-12T13:20:09.303+01:002021-07-12T13:20:09.303+01:00Very well written. The dialogue was intriguing an...Very well written. The dialogue was intriguing and captivating. It was somehow a comforting story to me... especially the ending.David Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03297938234518646778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-61420588599835072572021-07-12T12:11:14.853+01:002021-07-12T12:11:14.853+01:00Death from a child's viewpoint, with an intere...Death from a child's viewpoint, with an interesting backstory of life in Argentina in the 1970s. Enjoyed Fiona. Enjoyed working out Violet, and Tia.<br />Gentle pace. Fiona and Tia's characters distinct and well-drawn.Rosemary Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05797123703252258773noreply@blogger.com