tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post538574880582637434..comments2024-03-29T11:57:32.546+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Wingwork by Chris PanatierCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81244776337231544762019-02-21T21:44:56.292+00:002019-02-21T21:44:56.292+00:00Great story. I thought it was an excellent exampl...Great story. I thought it was an excellent example of taking an idea and making it into a story. Well done.edhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07438129952657889415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-45554947499564543072019-01-17T22:20:10.248+00:002019-01-17T22:20:10.248+00:00Great story kept me entertained from start to fini...Great story kept me entertained from start to finish Aprilkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02435160079061074473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21376171428843505472019-01-17T16:45:26.841+00:002019-01-17T16:45:26.841+00:00Having wings sounds hard. I still don't like t...Having wings sounds hard. I still don't like to fly!Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09971677787437241130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23972476146481073602019-01-15T21:25:37.148+00:002019-01-15T21:25:37.148+00:00I love this character so much. I can really hear ...I love this character so much. I can really hear her. Bravo on a super-creative piece.Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03454516164312036950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57926944213702551622019-01-15T21:24:47.008+00:002019-01-15T21:24:47.008+00:00Yes, you're being picky. Obviously this is ju...Yes, you're being picky. Obviously this is just the tooth fairy being innocent and whimsical. Don't read too much into it. <br />Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03454516164312036950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58561657105712662522019-01-15T15:06:24.361+00:002019-01-15T15:06:24.361+00:00$1.25 for a cab ride? Maybe Cleveland is differen...$1.25 for a cab ride? Maybe Cleveland is different or tooth fairy never rode a cab before. Seems she would have been busted regularly. I'm being picky.Doug Hawleyhttps://sites.google.com/site/aberrantword/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-46868471451720383942019-01-14T19:30:44.098+00:002019-01-14T19:30:44.098+00:00Interesting take. Good characters.
She seemed to...Interesting take. Good characters.<br /><br />She seemed to know that the soda was a fountain of youth elixir and could restore her wings. So wouldn't she have gotten one right away? Or asked the cabbie for one?<br />Seemed to be too much of a happy coincidence.Patrick Ritterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235970043155752374noreply@blogger.com