tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5535085618892604237..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: First Urges: A Homo Monstrum Chronicle by Kevin StadtCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72841926253429594712020-05-16T19:45:21.687+01:002020-05-16T19:45:21.687+01:00I echo the thought above, you could feel the confl...I echo the thought above, you could feel the conflict within Alex throughout. This work could be expanded into a longer piece. I'm glad you let us read it.James Rumpelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983186433099791617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36050761281776629262020-05-13T22:31:50.141+01:002020-05-13T22:31:50.141+01:00Nice bit of apocalyptic horror. Alex's struggl...Nice bit of apocalyptic horror. Alex's struggle to retain his humanity was very well done.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25640989871717956952020-05-09T01:07:03.057+01:002020-05-09T01:07:03.057+01:00Quite a different love story...very imaginative..t...Quite a different love story...very imaginative..the theme I got was You love what gives you pleasure...it kept me reading. I like the title and the ironic Cormac M references.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66854243129475440442020-05-08T20:26:06.248+01:002020-05-08T20:26:06.248+01:00An interesting mix of genres. Starts out boy meets...An interesting mix of genres. Starts out boy meets girl, maybe a coming of age piece. Sweet and sensitive. Morphs into something a little more dire with the evil neighbor. Then goes full bore SF/horror, but with a satisfying resolution. Kind of.Chris Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435037314612068333noreply@blogger.com