tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5563730932081426747..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: A Piece of Your Mind by Ryan CollinsCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-39748239565217507132020-08-26T01:52:05.158+01:002020-08-26T01:52:05.158+01:00I have to start being more careful who I tell my t...I have to start being more careful who I tell my theories to. Great story. Thanks for sharing.James Rumpelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983186433099791617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-90644763035991100572020-08-20T15:03:31.779+01:002020-08-20T15:03:31.779+01:00That twist slapped me in the face, didn't even...That twist slapped me in the face, didn't even have a whiff of a hint it was going to turn in that direction! Quite a masterful job of misdirection.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-68297359006904287722020-08-18T22:59:17.860+01:002020-08-18T22:59:17.860+01:00That was awesome! Totally unexpected ending.That was awesome! Totally unexpected ending.111https://www.blogger.com/profile/14432017590849418856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40849828460275262942020-08-18T04:25:18.673+01:002020-08-18T04:25:18.673+01:00Great story! I wonder what poor Randy was thinking...Great story! I wonder what poor Randy was thinking as he was being killed!? If only he had a chance to prove his theories... EMChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00104915218142381402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-68482886894266713912020-08-18T01:00:21.285+01:002020-08-18T01:00:21.285+01:00Nice work man! I loved it!Nice work man! I loved it!Paul Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06191174357109861813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38000368806286477522020-08-17T20:18:40.154+01:002020-08-17T20:18:40.154+01:00A very funny and absorbing tale. The character of ...A very funny and absorbing tale. The character of Randy is spot on. There's a lot of Randys around these days, the alien has his work cut out for him.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78457631217391095382020-08-17T20:09:47.038+01:002020-08-17T20:09:47.038+01:00This is amazing! Great job. Such an unexpected twi...This is amazing! Great job. Such an unexpected twist at the end! Love it!MeMeMehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01471182414397881293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55209432479397322772020-08-17T13:59:37.027+01:002020-08-17T13:59:37.027+01:00What a terrific story! So many amazing lines, espe...What a terrific story! So many amazing lines, especially in the dialogue. Impressed with the narrator's explanation that "conspiracies are just a way for you to make sense of the world" vs "a lot of bad shit just happens in the world for no good reason." And then that twist at the end. Wow.tacocathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04476403697488144871noreply@blogger.com