tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5672620635055640087..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Right Outside the Window by R.M. WarrenCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1192773782628329902016-08-04T15:34:49.464+01:002016-08-04T15:34:49.464+01:00very well written with convincing characters but i...very well written with convincing characters but i too felt the ending was disappointing and didn´t quite connect to the story.<br />However, well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-9173265648215613612016-08-02T16:51:03.328+01:002016-08-02T16:51:03.328+01:00I enjoy child characters. Thank you.I enjoy child characters. Thank you.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62256212604240114112016-08-02T14:42:10.618+01:002016-08-02T14:42:10.618+01:00Memories of growing up with an older sister.Memories of growing up with an older sister.Doug`noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78209580132298065692016-08-02T11:55:06.350+01:002016-08-02T11:55:06.350+01:00This works well because most people will be able t...This works well because most people will be able to relate to the irrational fears of childhood. Personally I thought "he believed it more than he did last October" would have been a good place to end it. Liked the attention given to the legend of the tree and enjoyed reading this.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02890852065465270108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-87031519390231567772016-08-02T09:26:57.916+01:002016-08-02T09:26:57.916+01:00I enjoyed the insights into Michael's experien...I enjoyed the insights into Michael's experiences as an eight year old boy, and the strands of awareness that the older characters lacked. For me, the earlier parts of the narrative were the strongest, up to the point that he slept in his sleeping bag in his own room. I thought that the tone of the last part was interesting but I wasn't sure that the berries from the oak tree and the pie felt as credible as the rest? However, the sense of doom edging inevitably closer was integral to the drift of this intriguing narrative. Many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com