tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5909522972598854997..comments2024-03-19T02:08:31.357+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Frani and the Little Red Fox By Artie KnappCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-89526040437743877722015-08-27T04:08:55.648+01:002015-08-27T04:08:55.648+01:00I really loved this story. It is delightful, as ot...I really loved this story. It is delightful, as other commenters have said, like a well-constructed little fable. I'm excited to share this one with some friends who I know will enjoy the clever storytelling. Thank you for sharing it.Hong Nguyen-Searshttp://hongnguyensears.weebly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-19505390852463327932015-08-18T06:48:43.328+01:002015-08-18T06:48:43.328+01:00Smply delightful storytelling here! So sweet, to t...Smply delightful storytelling here! So sweet, to think of those animals, animated behind the glass of the box, and the girl, on the other side, unaware!<br />Lisa Ciarfellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11400993023093819050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43400339416684544392015-08-03T19:55:45.339+01:002015-08-03T19:55:45.339+01:00What a delightful bedtime story! Beautifully writ...What a delightful bedtime story! Beautifully written and fascinating for children. <br /><br />rocabroAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3181660359362866412015-08-02T10:00:57.969+01:002015-08-02T10:00:57.969+01:00What a clever denouement! A happy outcome for the...What a clever denouement! A happy outcome for the little red fox, and children will love this story, as also the illustrations. Keep writing, Artie!<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47569682454301420582015-08-01T16:41:10.623+01:002015-08-01T16:41:10.623+01:00Sorry, my original comment was full of typos!
It&...Sorry, my original comment was full of typos! <br />It's a really clever story, beautiful in the simplicity of its writing and the twist was a brilliant surprise that genuinely made me smile. Lovely pics too, it would also make a great short animation. <br />ThanksMandi Lockleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08583430448640478127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-44138448755292010022015-07-31T15:32:43.234+01:002015-07-31T15:32:43.234+01:00Splendidly irresistible; the world of tiny animal ...Splendidly irresistible; the world of tiny animal figurines which have a life of their own! What a beautiful fox! I'm not surprised Frani dropped the lion, those chrome claws always seem designed to minimize ones chances! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76524141716112533042015-07-31T10:38:02.937+01:002015-07-31T10:38:02.937+01:00Wonderful! Great illustrations too .... playful pe...Wonderful! Great illustrations too .... playful perspectives and I'm sure that Frani will love the little red fox to bits. Maybe she'll come back for the others now that she has such finely honed skills - and they can all be reunited and play together when the lights go out at night?<br />Thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-20755768320956145112015-07-31T10:35:58.295+01:002015-07-31T10:35:58.295+01:00if I still had a small child I would definitely re...if I still had a small child I would definitely read this to him/her!<br />it´s very clever, with a great ending and brilliant illustrations!<br /><br />well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com