tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6303503658066118235..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Shag DeBrillen, Brickie (or The Usual Flat-out Failure at Most Things Unexceptional) by Tom SheehanCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-27185041076975843572018-01-24T22:14:02.708+00:002018-01-24T22:14:02.708+00:00Wow, well-written, ratchets up the tension, a tend...Wow, well-written, ratchets up the tension, a tender ending and release. I also thought that Shag possibly not being a reliable character, the back and forth with that, added to the suspense.Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40828911373445857322018-01-03T22:00:33.754+00:002018-01-03T22:00:33.754+00:00Wonderful! Engaging prose, interesting characters ...Wonderful! Engaging prose, interesting characters and tension in the story.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17411922194773700075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50237429439390944282018-01-02T11:58:01.753+00:002018-01-02T11:58:01.753+00:00A taut, emotionally charged story that allows an a...A taut, emotionally charged story that allows an apparently unexceptional guy to be heroic. Many thanks, CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47252905415188470782018-01-01T15:39:59.686+00:002018-01-01T15:39:59.686+00:00Great action and excellent character development. ...Great action and excellent character development. I love the image at the end of the brickie tenderly comforting the little girl. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.com