tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6664096795149909498..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Creak in the Floorboards by Jon BeightCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84574262865120603832014-04-27T18:55:04.336+01:002014-04-27T18:55:04.336+01:00Oh, this took me back to my childhood, I always ha...Oh, this took me back to my childhood, I always had this idea that whatever it was in the dark that watched me, it wouldn't hurt me if I closed my eyes. For some reason I believed that "whatever it was in the dark" sees things differently, that when I opened my eyes, it saw my eyes as closed and would attack, but if I closed my eyes, it would see my eyes as open and would keep lurking.<br />Reading this, I could remember how scared I was. This was well written.Ethan Regalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064777162768802306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-60688682227539991782014-01-15T02:47:51.033+00:002014-01-15T02:47:51.033+00:00Shivers! I could hear a voice full of resonance an...Shivers! I could hear a voice full of resonance and evil charm. It's that promise/threat of going on to terrorize the daughter that makes the monster especially scary. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-9544381432855568352014-01-07T19:41:23.667+00:002014-01-07T19:41:23.667+00:00Thanks Jim.Thanks Jim.Jonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28651896991244460542014-01-07T16:04:44.273+00:002014-01-07T16:04:44.273+00:00Things that go BUMP in the night...
Nicely done! I...Things that go BUMP in the night...<br />Nicely done! I like the passing of the torch at the end (or passage of the "creak in the floorboards")Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37790087614780751392014-01-07T12:15:07.869+00:002014-01-07T12:15:07.869+00:00Thanks MichaelThanks MichaelJonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43537830621390979832014-01-07T08:44:40.762+00:002014-01-07T08:44:40.762+00:00very good indeed, brilliantly descriptive. so it w...very good indeed, brilliantly descriptive. so it was you...<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com