tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6675460951904256504..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Open House by Brooke FieldhouseCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14862928993836444312016-10-27T19:36:31.878+01:002016-10-27T19:36:31.878+01:00Thank you all for your insightful and inspiring co...Thank you all for your insightful and inspiring comments. Thanks also for identifying that its tragi-comic...the way I see pretty much all life really.<br />B r o o k eAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-54992723389822668482016-10-27T19:27:19.424+01:002016-10-27T19:27:19.424+01:00An elegant and well written rendering of someone&#...An elegant and well written rendering of someone's reality cracking. The story moved confidently without letting the reader in on the final destination until the last minute. Very well done!Julie Carpenterhttp://www.sacredchickens.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86844987884554105362016-10-27T18:17:04.940+01:002016-10-27T18:17:04.940+01:00A salvo indeed, one that came always from unexpect...A salvo indeed, one that came always from unexpected places. Say no more...<br /><br />Pure fun!Mitchell Toewshttp://mitchellaneous.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23404668546048900532016-10-25T16:58:36.769+01:002016-10-25T16:58:36.769+01:00What can I say but the construction of this story ...What can I say but the construction of this story is '...sheer mechanical ballet'. The structure allows the reader to peer into the honeycomb of the broken mind. It made me feel anxious to peer inside. A fine offering, well done.<br />S.LucasAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86928489620891208622016-10-25T16:19:18.667+01:002016-10-25T16:19:18.667+01:00Fine details and an intriguing journey through a m...Fine details and an intriguing journey through a mindscape fraught with mines. Well done! Thanks.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59136407518314322742016-10-25T15:40:19.127+01:002016-10-25T15:40:19.127+01:00elegantly written piece depicting man´s descent in...elegantly written piece depicting man´s descent into paranoia, can´t help thinking he had it coming!<br /><br />Mike McC<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25940555846972141872016-10-25T11:06:52.976+01:002016-10-25T11:06:52.976+01:00A brilliant rendition of mental fracturing and the...A brilliant rendition of mental fracturing and the lurking insecurities that chase sanity to kingdom come. The story is fraught with twists and turns that conjure Fractal's hell. Great, Brooke, many thanks, CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com