tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6684841085211849311..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: I Drown Each Time by Tiffany Renee HarmonCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24296059679466659902023-02-02T14:39:13.327+00:002023-02-02T14:39:13.327+00:00A touching story that left me with a lot of questi... A touching story that left me with a lot of questions! I found the female creature in the sea to be the most mysterious one. The fact that she tried to 'protect' Lena from the male creature (who I assume was Lena's father) led me to believe that she even had compassion towards Lena's mother. C.J.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43382679514700591492022-04-23T23:17:26.933+01:002022-04-23T23:17:26.933+01:00Very compelling story. Moves quickly and energeti...Very compelling story. Moves quickly and energetically to a conclusion that's amazing, and inevitable in hindsight. Super reveals along the way. Very well done and enjoyable. David Lanverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047128645776257464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81057580412505967812022-04-20T00:58:54.489+01:002022-04-20T00:58:54.489+01:00Very good fiction, captured both the perspective o...Very good fiction, captured both the perspective of the aching child and that of the vanquished adult. <br /><br /><br /><br />Showed the perspective of the aching children as well as that of the vanquished adult. Was tragic and deliciously, one never knew where fantasy began and reality left off.<br /><br /><br />Bill Topehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00216384632458790098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21197757988967912122022-04-19T13:09:19.626+01:002022-04-19T13:09:19.626+01:00Wow! The ending took my breath away. The child'...Wow! The ending took my breath away. The child's narrative voice is totally compelling and believable. It feels to me as if Lena is on the cusp of childhood and adolescence. A gripping story.Sheena is writing...https://www.blogger.com/profile/00736320900905986308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85964445868953652022-04-18T21:51:31.734+01:002022-04-18T21:51:31.734+01:00Enjoyable story. Lena is a very well-drawn charact...Enjoyable story. Lena is a very well-drawn character.Philiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15037782981560326303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43923644246380120402022-04-18T17:43:47.964+01:002022-04-18T17:43:47.964+01:00Enjoyed this story. Very emotional. Don't kn...Enjoyed this story. Very emotional. Don't know whether I feel sorrier for Lena or her mother.<br />My only niggle was that Lena was playing in the sand with a bucket and spade like a small child but her thoughts and emotions were of a teenager.Rosemary Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05797123703252258773noreply@blogger.com