tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6945320246627421988..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Sinclairs by Whit WalkerCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-48995415662084563072013-11-14T10:02:51.853+00:002013-11-14T10:02:51.853+00:00first class, a great read, brilliant mix of charac...first class, a great read, brilliant mix of characters and the perfect ending<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-6272480410081945722013-02-20T00:00:42.231+00:002013-02-20T00:00:42.231+00:00I think it was wonderful! A denouement would have...I think it was wonderful! A denouement would have changed the whole tone. I absolutely loved it, Whit! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17045703036410461018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76231568576239224762013-02-12T13:44:20.866+00:002013-02-12T13:44:20.866+00:00The reaction of Beatrice in the end, after seeing ...The reaction of Beatrice in the end, after seeing the flower, should have been given. It would have rounded up things.Viswanatha Sastrynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84009432268714386572013-01-28T23:14:42.635+00:002013-01-28T23:14:42.635+00:00Thanks for your feedback! It is greatly appreciat...Thanks for your feedback! It is greatly appreciated.Whit Walkernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-12679638743950659202013-01-27T18:42:14.827+00:002013-01-27T18:42:14.827+00:00Strong characters, excellent writing, and a fascin...Strong characters, excellent writing, and a fascinating way to tell all their stories.Bria Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17429297309871518492noreply@blogger.com