tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6960233740463706128..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Divergent Memories by Tim FrankCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-54941198974876279972021-08-24T00:00:11.428+01:002021-08-24T00:00:11.428+01:00I like the story - kept me reading. I think the se...I like the story - kept me reading. I think the second paragraph sets the tone and is very well written. This could be expanded into a series.Ken Schalhoubnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56371715092143916642020-07-21T14:21:36.851+01:002020-07-21T14:21:36.851+01:00Interesting premise, very thought-provoking. Endin...Interesting premise, very thought-provoking. Ending left me feeling that Malcolm's struggles aren't truly over.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-22630154412486801472020-07-19T14:15:18.311+01:002020-07-19T14:15:18.311+01:00If we are created by the collection of our past ex...If we are created by the collection of our past experiences what happens when those memories are lost or changed? Interesting question addressed be this story. Well written and intriguing. Thanks for sharing it with us.James Rumpelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983186433099791617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25090665014018600602020-07-17T22:06:39.445+01:002020-07-17T22:06:39.445+01:00Very interesting premise. Good dialogue. I thoug...Very interesting premise. Good dialogue. I thought his transformative change at the end was a bit hard to believe though.Patrick Ritterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235970043155752374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-87306986895202676512020-07-17T17:41:46.777+01:002020-07-17T17:41:46.777+01:00An absorbing story. Its a bit of a horror tale. ...An absorbing story. Its a bit of a horror tale. The whole subject of memory and its effects on us is a topical one. Who knows what really happened, if memories can be implanted? Good story pace, ending realistic and we feel for the main character's dilemma.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.com