tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7204213428248874571..comments2024-03-28T08:17:06.703+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Drive by Ateret HaselkornCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35357156958916991392018-05-19T03:17:55.991+01:002018-05-19T03:17:55.991+01:00I liked this! Some really great lines in here. Fun...I liked this! Some really great lines in here. Fun story. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66617550684268840572018-05-16T13:54:28.601+01:002018-05-16T13:54:28.601+01:00I too responded to the 'home truths' phras...I too responded to the 'home truths' phrases ranging from 'chicken soup is good for the soul' to Grandma's 'if you don't make time for trouble it won't have time for you'...Huge amounts of detail to absorb in this disturbing and always restless internal monologue.<br />B r o o k eAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23992149616812190842018-05-15T02:26:56.192+01:002018-05-15T02:26:56.192+01:00I’m glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you.I’m glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you.Ateretnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49344708585287079062018-05-15T02:25:52.728+01:002018-05-15T02:25:52.728+01:00Thank you so much for reading and taking the time ...Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. Ateretnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59409114509220539522018-05-13T15:22:55.933+01:002018-05-13T15:22:55.933+01:00Excellent job of getting inside the head of the MC...Excellent job of getting inside the head of the MC. I liked many of her observations, like “when you share yourself with everyone, you break into too many pieces to be known.” A bit of an indictment of social media. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-45342332681018620652018-05-12T16:15:18.432+01:002018-05-12T16:15:18.432+01:00An interesting and scary twist. This is one of the...An interesting and scary twist. This is one of the many things I fear about self-driving cars. That said, your writing style and choice of words makes this character come to life, as you pretty much are looking through her eyes and with her skew on things. I'm left wondering if she'll return to driving or find some other line of work ;-)<br />JimJim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com