tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7243419729181524334..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Dorothea Parker on North Lake Shore Drive by L. S. SharrowCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70113797256104447632017-08-02T14:20:14.003+01:002017-08-02T14:20:14.003+01:00Thank you for your kind remarks, Lynda Kelly. Alwa...Thank you for your kind remarks, Lynda Kelly. Always value your thoughts.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01220456545288856937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49822539711474147092017-08-02T09:00:26.375+01:002017-08-02T09:00:26.375+01:00This was a great read. Anything remotely DP does i...This was a great read. Anything remotely DP does it for me! I could 'hear' Barrington's incessant monologue. Love it.Lynda Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10100932387024511329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-26964429917195200552017-04-06T19:59:22.934+01:002017-04-06T19:59:22.934+01:00Thank you for your kind remarks, Richard. I have r...Thank you for your kind remarks, Richard. I have recently enjoyed a short story you have written. <br /><br />Cheers,<br />LauraLaurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01220456545288856937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-52853044624064611102017-04-06T19:41:51.571+01:002017-04-06T19:41:51.571+01:00Hi, Thanks for critting my work 'Letter from K...Hi, Thanks for critting my work 'Letter from Kolentawezi Jail' on circle critique. I looked you up and the story hooked me. A few little points (too small to mention) but such a lovely story. Barrington -such a fitting name to a wonderful character.<br />Well done.<br />Richardbakerbalham.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14294307643741574845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50036489235853100042016-01-09T00:56:22.027+00:002016-01-09T00:56:22.027+00:00A belated thank you for you fine reviewers. I was ...A belated thank you for you fine reviewers. I was out of touch over part of the Christmas and New Year's holidays, and want you to know that I am humbled by your thoughtful and kind comments.<br /><br />L.S. SharrowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-63982965983862429562015-12-13T20:27:28.404+00:002015-12-13T20:27:28.404+00:00Barrington is so well-defined. His repetition and ...Barrington is so well-defined. His repetition and delusion (?) he is engaged to a fine lady makes the reader suspect he may have dementia. Great dialogue and satisfying ending.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-80588494910007192642015-12-13T15:26:28.912+00:002015-12-13T15:26:28.912+00:00I agree with Mike, the characterisations are excel...I agree with Mike, the characterisations are excellent and the vibrant dialogue keeps the reader engaged. I hope that we see more of your work here.<br />Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-281880258971774452015-12-13T11:47:37.385+00:002015-12-13T11:47:37.385+00:00this is really first class, brilliantly drawn char...this is really first class, brilliantly drawn characters,<br />beautifully descriptive, and fabulous dialogue, also has the ring of truth about it.the neighbour from hell!<br />great!<br />Mike McC<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com