tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7344114979817658405..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Wish Box by Ray J RobbioCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-16553718274611263342014-01-15T03:08:12.941+00:002014-01-15T03:08:12.941+00:00Definitely creepy. Unsettling. I enjoyed this take...Definitely creepy. Unsettling. I enjoyed this take on the adage, "be careful what you wish for. "<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-33759664301295513142013-10-23T13:55:47.347+01:002013-10-23T13:55:47.347+01:00Interesting story. Makes me think of The Twilight ...Interesting story. Makes me think of The Twilight Zone.William Quincy Bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14337095766556949027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-15363976283813122732013-10-13T23:00:19.127+01:002013-10-13T23:00:19.127+01:00Ray the Wish Box was so gripping. I was very surpr...Ray the Wish Box was so gripping. I was very surprised by the ending. The story was vivid. It was as if Piper was palpable. A great read. Keep up the amazing writing!Amanda Fnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49039915040501242272013-10-10T15:56:51.905+01:002013-10-10T15:56:51.905+01:00Mr. Robbio, loved the story. I could not guess th...Mr. Robbio, loved the story. I could not guess the ending....very clever.<br />I'll be looking forward to more stories written by you. Please keep on writing !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-63309647771525256472013-10-09T18:47:42.207+01:002013-10-09T18:47:42.207+01:00I loved this story! It pulled me in and kept me re...I loved this story! It pulled me in and kept me reading. I can't wait for the next one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74388909276865838882013-10-04T16:53:33.745+01:002013-10-04T16:53:33.745+01:00Ray- so nice to learn something new about you - di...Ray- so nice to learn something new about you - didn't know you're writing! Me, too! Always loved it! Thanks for sharing your story - I was intrigued and compelled to keep reading!Leah DeCesare - MothersCirclehttp://www.motherscircle.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13694737220336340792013-09-30T15:09:39.439+01:002013-09-30T15:09:39.439+01:00I thought the story was very well written and the ...I thought the story was very well written and the ending was great<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81696699154424549812013-09-29T13:36:45.100+01:002013-09-29T13:36:45.100+01:00Nice ending. Overall the story needs more color;I ...Nice ending. Overall the story needs more color;I think the old rule of "Show don't tell" should be kept in mind for the next draft. Janet Dillinghamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08785656392019585563noreply@blogger.com