tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7577299983578212226..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Lost Alohas by Gary IvesCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-87469247109565241432021-08-07T18:12:49.459+01:002021-08-07T18:12:49.459+01:00Moving tale, vivid and nostalgic. Such a tragic en...Moving tale, vivid and nostalgic. Such a tragic ending, felt bad for both of them.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81831444532551109212021-07-23T15:34:53.336+01:002021-07-23T15:34:53.336+01:00Oh what an ending! I never expected that.
An enj...Oh what an ending! I never expected that. <br />An enjoyable read. Took a bit of getting into, probably too much by way of working in, but once mc met Gerry the story became a page-turner. Interesting that author revealed mc was Indian mid-way through. This certainly added another dimension.Rosemary Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05797123703252258773noreply@blogger.com