tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7890427254776914003..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Haunted Telescope by David HensonCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91754960986853202712019-01-20T15:24:44.991+00:002019-01-20T15:24:44.991+00:00Thank you, David. I was going for a bit of Twiligh...Thank you, David. I was going for a bit of Twilight Zone feel and am glad it came across that way to you. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36199782118891417162019-01-18T14:09:30.862+00:002019-01-18T14:09:30.862+00:00Also, the story reminded me of classic Twilight Zo...Also, the story reminded me of classic Twilight Zone stories. For instance, the one with the camera that shows the future, "A Most Unusual Camera." Also reminiscent of Hitchcock's half-hour stories. Lots of fun!Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09971677787437241130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3148986243493784842019-01-18T14:04:21.020+00:002019-01-18T14:04:21.020+00:00I like the ambiguity. Who knows what's going o...I like the ambiguity. Who knows what's going on? The more sure one is, likely the more self-deluded one is.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09971677787437241130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57146716194216812362019-01-11T14:23:40.476+00:002019-01-11T14:23:40.476+00:00Thanks for your feedback. Thanks for your feedback. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62882100532652578882019-01-09T23:06:15.349+00:002019-01-09T23:06:15.349+00:00I liked the dialogue, both between characters and ...I liked the dialogue, both between characters and the inner dialogue of the main character. Very believable. The story changed a lot, maybe too rapidly for me.Patrick Ritterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235970043155752374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-291627109552437632019-01-07T23:25:59.236+00:002019-01-07T23:25:59.236+00:00Thanks!Thanks!David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-32810780938281409282019-01-07T21:51:14.826+00:002019-01-07T21:51:14.826+00:00Nice story, Dave. Like the last line.Nice story, Dave. Like the last line.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04895680663569593422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1102832322866859182019-01-04T20:05:53.940+00:002019-01-04T20:05:53.940+00:00Inventive. Not for those that don't like ambi...Inventive. Not for those that don't like ambiguity.Doug Hawleyhttps://sites.google.com/site/aberrantword/noreply@blogger.com