tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8033843121962127643..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Down and Out in Paris by Arun DawaniCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55695445881296690292013-12-28T04:41:56.369+00:002013-12-28T04:41:56.369+00:00Quite lovely, and sadly, quite realistic.Quite lovely, and sadly, quite realistic.Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06581452841887082483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59180863359750636672013-12-20T21:49:15.074+00:002013-12-20T21:49:15.074+00:00Thank you all so much!!! It's the first short ...Thank you all so much!!! It's the first short story I've written and I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. <br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12134335877358687020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-52190835267139693262013-12-20T17:23:40.115+00:002013-12-20T17:23:40.115+00:00A new take on an old story. One feels exasperated...A new take on an old story. One feels exasperated and empathetic with Vallerie in turn, experiencing her disappointment and disillusionment when she can no longer deny the truth. Convincingly written. <br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91733447575821488042013-12-20T16:36:21.110+00:002013-12-20T16:36:21.110+00:00Very nicely done. I like the grim reality check of...Very nicely done. I like the grim reality check of someone coming to Paris (or any site with such build-up). And I really enjoyed the overall writing style.<br /> Obviously Vallarie was being taken for a ride by more than just the Eurostar...Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86962628065035621252013-12-20T08:33:24.520+00:002013-12-20T08:33:24.520+00:00this is so beautifully written, one example, of ma...this is so beautifully written, one example, of many, : 'the way he looks when we're driving at night, shadows sliding over his kind face', <br />and has the ring of truth about it. I liked it enormously.<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com