tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8037698806301673576..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Inheritance by Beryl Ensor-SmithCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56947992363978435262014-07-04T14:42:47.344+01:002014-07-04T14:42:47.344+01:00Just love this story. Had me giggling out loud.Just love this story. Had me giggling out loud.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07998837733272835592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-19329237319642750012013-06-19T12:52:56.306+01:002013-06-19T12:52:56.306+01:00Thoroughly enjoyed this get-rich, get-even story, ...Thoroughly enjoyed this get-rich, get-even story, the kind one of the old bards would run with, through the hay field, the apple orchard, the lemon grove, right to the camp fire to share with all the folks. It has it all. My grandfather, on the dark summer porch or the warm winter hearth, told such stories that still carry the early charm of words' magic.Tom Sheehannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77975031238011467212013-06-06T17:51:26.859+01:002013-06-06T17:51:26.859+01:00That was really fun. He who laughs last.....That was really fun. He who laughs last.....Katie Gilbertsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00551418803286900837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66807923353547338072013-05-31T12:59:50.241+01:002013-05-31T12:59:50.241+01:00Thanks, Emily, for your kind comments.
Best wishes...Thanks, Emily, for your kind comments.<br />Best wishes,<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73109448033185597082013-05-30T03:21:20.439+01:002013-05-30T03:21:20.439+01:00Excellent details. A really rich and unique read!Excellent details. A really rich and unique read!Emily https://www.blogger.com/profile/05275233979739626834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58584926844743171622013-05-28T10:40:41.884+01:002013-05-28T10:40:41.884+01:00Thanks, Anonymous. Google's marvellous, isn&#...Thanks, Anonymous. Google's marvellous, isn't it? A wonderful educational tool. Glad you enjoyed the story.<br />Best wishes,<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1834983558297939592013-05-27T19:54:52.332+01:002013-05-27T19:54:52.332+01:00Thoroughly enjoyable read, with the twists and tur...Thoroughly enjoyable read, with the twists and turns being fully utilized by characters and the author, and often seeking and learning new word definitions via immediate Google search. Nice work here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37363225077069685352013-05-27T15:42:14.313+01:002013-05-27T15:42:14.313+01:00Thank you, Laura. So glad you enjoyed it. Hope t...Thank you, Laura. So glad you enjoyed it. Hope to read more of your stories too, on this site.<br />Best wishes,<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23277225261918059532013-05-27T03:35:09.476+01:002013-05-27T03:35:09.476+01:00What a well written story with a wonderful plot li...What a well written story with a wonderful plot line. I loved the story, how it unfolded with Willie meeting the love of his life and of course the ending which put Hester in her place. Very nicely done. The characters were all wonderfully drawn.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64117784378900443082013-05-25T17:02:22.576+01:002013-05-25T17:02:22.576+01:00Thank you, Garreth. Most countries have language ...Thank you, Garreth. Most countries have language idiosyncrasies that are particular to each; so does mine. In South Africa, some Afrikaans words have been adopted by English speakers and vice versa. Makes life intresting!<br />Best wishes,<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59232212669567638922013-05-25T12:07:28.771+01:002013-05-25T12:07:28.771+01:00I particularly enjoyed some of the language in the...I particularly enjoyed some of the language in the dialogue, even though I wasn't familiar with how people speak in South Africa,<br /><br />Garreth KeatingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-19579756431081359462013-05-24T14:16:14.190+01:002013-05-24T14:16:14.190+01:00Thank you, Michael for your encouraging and positi...Thank you, Michael for your encouraging and positive comments. They're much appreciated. This is the first story in a series of 17 all set in the same fictitious village, featuring the same characters. Perhaps others will be published on this site in future, if considered good enough!<br />Best wishes,<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67034029557253410492013-05-24T12:25:00.454+01:002013-05-24T12:25:00.454+01:00this is a very interesting story, not usually what...this is a very interesting story, not usually what i would choose to read. but it is so well written and draws you into a, for me, different world.<br />well done!<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com