tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8066453052935065399..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Wasted by Jo MorganCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72189661572227645132012-10-19T05:01:47.268+01:002012-10-19T05:01:47.268+01:00I was engaged from the onset (though I might have ...I was engaged from the onset (though I might have flipped the first two paragraphs for a more intense hook).<br />Six short paragraphs and I have the whole backstory of the dead girl through the eyes of an expert detective and the driving force for a man not to waste any more time with what really mattered inhis life. We should all be so lucky. Very nice, Jo.<br /><br />O. D. HegreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-17822060244314407682012-09-08T20:30:31.195+01:002012-09-08T20:30:31.195+01:00I loved it. Very short, sweet and meaningful. Grea...I loved it. Very short, sweet and meaningful. Great! <br /><br />Ziyad Hayatli Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75580414159055198282012-09-08T10:35:11.256+01:002012-09-08T10:35:11.256+01:00life´s too short, often it takes something, a shoc...life´s too short, often it takes something, a shock, to wake us up to what we´ve got and stand to lose.<br />a nice story, i mean that in a positive way, with a message. i found it very convincing.<br /><br />michael mccarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com