tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8088666148960210115..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Influential Amnesia of Mr. Billows by Matthew ShovlinCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21217355159964728102021-01-19T20:52:07.368+00:002021-01-19T20:52:07.368+00:00Very funny story. I know these guys... Good snappy...Very funny story. I know these guys... Good snappy realistic dialogue. Takes a really nice weird turn.Bill Kitchernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-87459277558915717702021-01-19T02:10:45.820+00:002021-01-19T02:10:45.820+00:00Very clever idea, and executed perfectly. Great bl...Very clever idea, and executed perfectly. Great blend of horror and humor.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49082728351352439552021-01-18T18:26:36.705+00:002021-01-18T18:26:36.705+00:00A wild ride. I had no idea where this was going, a...A wild ride. I had no idea where this was going, and yet it got there so smoothly I didn't mind a moment. Paul Lambhttp://www.paullamb.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66155255124542983002021-01-15T20:08:42.305+00:002021-01-15T20:08:42.305+00:00Great premise and dialogue. Excellent characters. ...Great premise and dialogue. Excellent characters. The ending kind of lost me. When did the officer show up?Patrick Ritterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235970043155752374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-533592195116514812021-01-12T21:15:57.640+00:002021-01-12T21:15:57.640+00:00This was a very entertaining and well-paced story....This was a very entertaining and well-paced story...clearly written, original and creative, and the dialogue was fun and totally believable, it shaped the characters so we could know them.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84385729561460022302021-01-12T18:24:06.448+00:002021-01-12T18:24:06.448+00:00Dialog-heavy stories usually lose me, but this one...Dialog-heavy stories usually lose me, but this one's snappy and clever, and held my attention. A funny character study. Could be coerced into a screen play I bet. Chris Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13435037314612068333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14327143557989036642021-01-12T03:08:12.566+00:002021-01-12T03:08:12.566+00:00Very Funny. The banter between the roommates remin...Very Funny. The banter between the roommates reminded me of MASH, where every character was witty and quick with a jibe. The toy car line had be laughing out loud. The MC must of had underlying psychological problems that I didn't figure out, but his extreme reaction only serves to add to the humor. I appreciate you sharing your story.James Rumpelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983186433099791617noreply@blogger.com