tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8670337409406750980..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Leonard Bessom and the Pet ParadeCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25142578460131063682016-09-19T01:08:39.712+01:002016-09-19T01:08:39.712+01:00Charming, engaging, ticklish ... the kind of story...Charming, engaging, ticklish ... the kind of story you don't find much these days ... sadly. I agree with the others about the pace - quick and pithy.klgardner1@yahoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73342119162487157432016-08-24T08:54:54.362+01:002016-08-24T08:54:54.362+01:00Ceinwen, Nancy, & Brooke --
Thank you for you...Ceinwen, Nancy, & Brooke --<br />Thank you for your kind comments. I'm glad you like the story. It was fun for me to write ... and I did read it aloud in the process. This is the THIRD Leonard Bessom story I have published. So if you're interested in reading more of Leonard and his friends, they're on my website (CliffordHuiStoriesEtc.com) under the category Stories About Friends.Cliff ..noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-63482355994120052292016-08-23T21:31:58.721+01:002016-08-23T21:31:58.721+01:00This really tickled me. At first I thought the ...This really tickled me. At first I thought the 'Aaah aaahs, yeows', and 'eews' were contrived but then I realized the rhythm of them works very well when you read them aloud! The panoramic description of fun and gaiety is generally good for ones well-being!<br />B r o o k e Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-11837105845604651592016-08-23T17:27:57.082+01:002016-08-23T17:27:57.082+01:00I planned to read a bit, go get started for the da...I planned to read a bit, go get started for the day, and come back later. Great stories can change a reader's priority. I had to keep reading. I found the story engaging, amusing, nostalgic, kind spirited, compelling and just so much fun. What a wonderful way to start the day! Thank you. Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47604731404466884652016-08-23T10:37:00.762+01:002016-08-23T10:37:00.762+01:00I could imagine this as a graphic piece? I loved t...I could imagine this as a graphic piece? I loved the pace and rhythm of the writing - and the excellent characterisations of the children. A nice funny tale that provided a welcome diversion. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com