tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8736795032147892435..comments2024-03-28T08:51:20.299+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Saving Carla by J. H. OtterstromCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71135909662106231192014-03-18T15:50:06.685+00:002014-03-18T15:50:06.685+00:00Good job Joe. Look forward to reading more in the ...Good job Joe. Look forward to reading more in the future. Bill H.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-31614946052064489212013-12-17T14:56:19.492+00:002013-12-17T14:56:19.492+00:00Thanks for all the comments everyone. I had a lot...Thanks for all the comments everyone. I had a lot of funny writing this one. This is also my first publication and I'm glad everyone enjoyed it.Joe Otterstromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03159665487950172636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67863655646461387302013-12-17T00:48:17.757+00:002013-12-17T00:48:17.757+00:00I didn't see that ending coming. Nice finish.I didn't see that ending coming. Nice finish.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29328649235305945792013-12-15T23:03:24.798+00:002013-12-15T23:03:24.798+00:00Good point! I guess I "choked" when it c...Good point! I guess I "choked" when it came to mentioning Stephanie...Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35952814019457390352013-12-15T18:47:30.363+00:002013-12-15T18:47:30.363+00:00very nice indeed, Carla was pretty despicable, but...very nice indeed, Carla was pretty despicable, but what about Stephanie? Excellent Twist.<br /><br />Michael MccarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74897736603462972012013-12-15T16:41:44.321+00:002013-12-15T16:41:44.321+00:00Nice twist at the end. I enjoyed the story very m...Nice twist at the end. I enjoyed the story very much.Tonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08811862864982783145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-8811247531515754462013-12-15T16:41:43.176+00:002013-12-15T16:41:43.176+00:00Nice twist at the end. I enjoyed the story very m...Nice twist at the end. I enjoyed the story very much.Tonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08811862864982783145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3980161570646153812013-12-15T16:28:01.777+00:002013-12-15T16:28:01.777+00:00Creepy! Nice development of Carla. I hated her jus...Creepy! Nice development of Carla. I hated her just a few paragraphs into the story.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com