tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8849280397956773808..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Marked as Strange by Kristina KellingleyCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-18801797401883995702013-06-13T12:53:43.750+01:002013-06-13T12:53:43.750+01:00Helpless and hopeless done really well.Helpless and hopeless done really well.Paul Beckmanhttp://paulbeckmanstories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36170466556289580582013-06-13T11:08:54.637+01:002013-06-13T11:08:54.637+01:00I just wanted to say a very big thank you to all y...I just wanted to say a very big thank you to all you lovely people who took the time to read and leave a comment on my story. It has to be the best feeling in the world when someone reads and enjoys something you've written. Thank you all again.Krystina Kellingleyhttps://www.facebook.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59891589506628239462013-06-13T09:10:19.558+01:002013-06-13T09:10:19.558+01:00Chilling! I, too think it could be the start of a...Chilling! I, too think it could be the start of a book. CDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-22084017795614571732013-06-13T01:58:10.371+01:002013-06-13T01:58:10.371+01:00Awesome stuff. Really enjoyed this.Awesome stuff. Really enjoyed this.David Davishttp://cambodiaseo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-30256203670412771492013-06-13T00:21:45.867+01:002013-06-13T00:21:45.867+01:00THis was gripping right form the beginning. Loved ...THis was gripping right form the beginning. Loved it.Katie Gilbertsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00551418803286900837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55798721896667045212013-06-12T18:37:43.753+01:002013-06-12T18:37:43.753+01:00Intriguing, there was so much good characterizatio...Intriguing, there was so much good characterization and tension in this short story, that I wanted to read more and wished it was a book. Great writing and good satisfying ending that gave me plenty to wonder about. Hope they'll be more from this writer. <br /><br />Maria WilbrinkAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-44556426102907919982013-06-11T22:55:59.768+01:002013-06-11T22:55:59.768+01:00I loved the ending, nice to know the kid will have...I loved the ending, nice to know the kid will have some company in Riverdale. Felt so sorry for him. The way the author wrote his character evoked a lot of empathy. Good solid writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-46149689626222074462013-06-11T19:17:50.608+01:002013-06-11T19:17:50.608+01:00A really well paced and intriguing story. Rounded ...A really well paced and intriguing story. Rounded characters and a great hook in the ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-26529850586478262762013-06-11T19:14:36.247+01:002013-06-11T19:14:36.247+01:00Tony Simon
A great read.This had me hooked immedi...Tony Simon<br /><br />A great read.This had me hooked immediately and kept me hooked to the last sentence and beyond. Love the characters and the atmospheric prose. I hope we see more of this writer.Tony Simonhttp://www.tsasolutions.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86854532245609640542013-06-11T12:48:29.565+01:002013-06-11T12:48:29.565+01:00very good indeed! love the characters and the buil...very good indeed! love the characters and the build up, a real sense of hopelessness.<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com