tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8890231670484611043..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Jonah by R. C. CapassoCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66786765116145315512021-09-29T13:48:14.091+01:002021-09-29T13:48:14.091+01:00Thank you for reading the story. Your thoughtful c...Thank you for reading the story. Your thoughtful comments are helpful to me.R.C. Capassohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568655427142175947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23523416701666345352021-09-28T16:11:11.597+01:002021-09-28T16:11:11.597+01:00Entertaining story and realistic, clear descriptio...Entertaining story and realistic, clear descriptions about the time and place...a good look at the crossing over between madness and reality, and the superstitions of the old days.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76619380173052368182021-09-26T14:17:40.234+01:002021-09-26T14:17:40.234+01:00Thank you for reading the story. I appreciate your...Thank you for reading the story. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.R.C. Capassohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17568655427142175947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-83639069979160179922021-09-25T18:28:27.436+01:002021-09-25T18:28:27.436+01:00I enjoyed this. The pace, characterization, and d...I enjoyed this. The pace, characterization, and dialog all worked together in a very cohesive fashion. There's an inevitability present throughout, but that doesn't diminish the action and the story. I appreciate that this didn't get bogged down in long-winded characterizations of the storm, etc. The description of the ghosts was vivid and complete with an economy of words. Well-crafted! David Lanverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047128645776257464noreply@blogger.com